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Where the Tired PeOple Go

Sun Jan 8, 2012 3:45 PM EST
arts, poverty, hunger, poem, homelessness, segregation, surrender
By mountainfirefall
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Where the Tired people Go

 

I've been there

seen where the tired limping people have to go....

 

shadowed watchers

hiding fickle tricksters from a progress never spoken only sold

inset, like gold smiths forming fascinations

of a burnt misery in a two bar molten tension

 

Listen

as music draws breath into out of lungs long gone, distressed

from achievement thrusting hands

upward empty too glad pushed then leaving always left.

 

Thankful cords discontented fully forced

steeled eyes that looked to long on their fabricated effort

finding it crumbled disposable – forsaken

then the music plays to take them away

 

so tired a people they play at laying their broken heads

waiting.... waiting... for the smoldering,

smell it? Yes I failed at something was it long ago?

Now I'm pissing under overpasses.

 

Its lostness found

coddled with vodka, the remnants of what was born dead

parental mischief – wrapped in rules to make

to disappoint, beat at the door that burned the neighbors house down.

 

I watched it.

In this tired place full of fruitful addiction

I could see it clearly in the siding hanging from the basement wall,

just south of the interstate.

 

my mother, many years gone,

once told me that humiliation and embarrassment was something,

would serve me well, offer me character if only I would go there

so, I rage with words and listen

 

tell me something...

tell me its been a good life, listening. I've meet some wonderful people

I care for them now. on their behalf... I choose.

I choose to humiliate myself, and show you outloud where they've gone.

 

 

by Mountainfirefall 

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mountainfirefall

when was the last time you went there.

  • 1 vote
Reply#1 - Sun Jan 8, 2012 3:45 PM EST
mstanley2265

I'm clipping to The World Seen Through Poetry group...well done, well done, mountainfirefall.

and sending invite to the group..:)

    #1.1 - Sun Jan 8, 2012 9:13 PM EST
    mountainfirefall

    thank you mstanley:)

    • 1 vote
    #1.2 - Sun Jan 8, 2012 9:16 PM EST
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    River-239955

    This is very beautiful, firefall. Very beautiful indeed.....

      Reply#2 - Sun Jan 8, 2012 8:29 PM EST
      mountainfirefall

      :)... hope you've been well River

      • 1 vote
      #2.1 - Sun Jan 8, 2012 9:16 PM EST
      River-239955

      I am well enough...

      This reminds me of the faces I see around town during my commute. So very many handicapped, disoriented, lost souls, and so little assistance for them.

        #2.2 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:35 PM EST
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        Abby.

        This made me sad, somehow.....

          Reply#3 - Mon Jan 9, 2012 5:49 AM EST
          mountainfirefall

          I've been thinking about this for days.

          I've been wondering...

          what this says to you.

          i rage at the sadness you see, and i wanted the rage to be stronger then the sad.

            #3.1 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:26 PM EST
            Abby.

            i rage at the sadness you see,

            I'm sorry, I didn't mean to offend you.
            :(

            • 1 vote
            #3.2 - Wed Jan 11, 2012 3:12 PM EST
            mountainfirefall

            no no abby... the sadness, ... not you.

            i rage at the sadness. Maybe if we remove the places that we make 'tired people' go, we wouldn't be so sad, cause we wouldn't be consigning people to places where they can't be seen..

            you see?

            • 1 vote
            #3.3 - Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:12 AM EST
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